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Old 02-25-2006
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Ok this is my first attempt at a serious Fan fic,and it's only the first chapter and I didn't wanna go into too much so here it is,enjoy!

Chapter one


Seth blinked once...then twice...then fully opened his eyes.It was all blured around him.He tried to lift his arm,but found that he couldn't.It was the next day after the crash and nodody knew each other yet,the only words Seth had spoken,where to ask for a ciggorette. Seth lifted his head up to see it was raining,he rolled his eyes,the last thing he needed was bad weather.Seth looked back at his arm and lifted it with his other,then he cracked it rather painfully.He had only pulled a muscle.Seth heard noices outside of the rather febble tent he had tried to make himself.He came out of the tent to see everybody rushing towards something near the jungle.Seth ran with the crowd,his short black curls moving with him.
"Excuse me" Seth said trying to clear a path through the people in front of the thing.After a couple of people pushing him he got annoyed."MOVE" Seth shouted pushing a man in front of him.Seth was at the frount of the crowd now,he looked down at what they where all looking at.His eyes widened at what he saw.
It was a womans body,sprawled across the sand.Seth examined the body more closely with his eyes,and seen that she had been shot in the heart,he slowly looked around him,one of these people had shot this woman...one of them was a murderer.
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wow, really good, can't wait to read on :D

you know what, you and me should do fanfic together, take it in turns to do a chapter, it will be a little like RPG... it will be interesting to see how the story unfolds :D

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really?

That'd be really cool! :)
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ill start a completley new one later in the afternoon bout 4pm UK prob 12pm USA :D
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Ok cool,I don't know if I'll be on then but I'll try :)
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cool, in a bout 2hrs time :D
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:D Yup :D
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Okay so here goes chapter 2,hope you like:

Chapter 2

Seth looked back down at the body again,hoping that she'd just jump back up and shout out "Gotcha".When Seth realised that she wasn't,he slowly backed away from the body and started his way back to his tent.

As Seth entered the tent,and sat down,he noticed that it had stopped raining.Seth picked up his pack of ciggorettes,and his lighter.He then put the ciggorette to his mouth and lit it.
"Ah.." Seth said breathing out the smoke "Sweet...sweet nicotine" he sighed,taking another puff.

As Seth was just begginning to forget about what he had just seen spread accross the sand,he seen a man coming out of the jungle,his hand wrapped in some wet clothing.Seth took aanother puff,and almost choked when he seen the mans trainers.They where covered in blood!

As Seth was trying to recover from his coughing fit,and think about the blood at the same time,he felt a small tap on his shoulder.He looked around and saw a woman about the same age as him,in a bright orange T-shirt and a pair of jeans."Yeh?" Seth said trying to dignify his voice,so she didn't think he sounded like the exorcist...he failed.

She gave him a weird look,and sat opposite him.
"Can I have one?" She answered,eying his ciggorette.
"Sure" Seth said (still sounding like he had lung cancer)."You smoke?"He asked handing her a ciggorette and his lighter,she took them,and gave him another weird look,almost laughing at his voice.
"No" She said looking at the direction where Seth seen the man with the blood on his trainers."But,you know?" She said lighting the ciggorette."With the whole "woman lying out there dead" thing,I thought I'd give it a go."

Seth laughed silently.Then he looked behind him,and seen the man with the clothes,go under a bit of the plane,that he had obviously used to try and build a shelter.He narrowed his eyes,and blew out the smoke in him mouth.
"You seen him to then?" The woman asked.Seth turned around to her and this time it was him giving her the weird look."The man with the blood on his shoes?" Seth asked,"Yeh I seen him."

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