Stranded With Nowhere To Hide

[LostInParadise]

Chaper 1

It was a cool morning, the survivors had been stranded for 3 days and the mood was beginning to change. Ed awoke abrutly, he could hear shouts from the beach. Without thinking he got up and ran out of his shelter, a crowd had gathered and two men were shouting abusively.
"Why don't you *#@! off, move to another part of the island, you ain't stayin' here. You've caused enough damage!" The men were arguing about something, Ed was listening for any hints as to what the aguement was about.
"I ain't going nowhere, you can't make me. If you had been kinder to your wife she may not have come running to me!"
"Don't you dare talk to me like that!" the anger was rising in both the men. Ed could see this ending badly and tried to get it stopped, but before he could there were screams and shouts. A gunshot sound was heard, and then silence.
The tall man stood there, gun out infront and with a look of happiness on his face. The crowd had dispersed and all was left was a body lying in the red sand. Ed started to back away and as he did, he suddenly stopped. He froze to the spot, he was worried...
"Ed?"
Ed turned his head to the man with the gun.
"How do you know my name? Who are you?" He questioned.
Thoughts were running through his head, he had not spoken to this man before and somehow he knew Ed's name.

Feel free to comment.

[I_love_sawyer]

Hey it seems pretty good,I can't wait untill the next chapter.It's good that you left on suspence.

[LostInParadise]

I'm not sure if i'll carry on, hardly anybody seems to be interested in fanfic...
:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[artik]

I would like to read the stuff, but there's so much stuff to be doing in other threads... when nobody's on sometime I'll read.

[I_love_sawyer]

No please carry on,I promise I'll read it lol at least you got 1 person readin it

[artik]

Ahaha, he seems into it, do it man.

[LostInParadise]

kool, thanks.... maybe people just can't be arsed to read loads???
:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

[artik]

Well, people have lives off of the forum tooooo

EDIT: I just read it, I like it too keep going.

[LostInParadise]

No please carry on,I promise I'll read it lol at least you got 1 person readin it

Ahaha, he seems into it, do it man

Maybe I will but i'm not doing it tonight :)

[I_love_sawyer]

Ok that's cool,I guess I just want a good peice of lost fan fic to read :)