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Old 01-22-2006
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Part 1
All Charlie could hear was his own breath as he sat in the corner of a cell. Charlie had no clue where he was on the island. All he did know was that Aaron had been kiddnapped, and so had he. Charlie look to the right and saw not Aaron nor Walt. They were all just empty cells. He looked to the left and saw more empty cells, but then Charlie quickly looked again, and there was Micheal sitting in a cell far from his own.

Back on the other side of the island Sun was comforting Claire.
"It'll be ok Claire. Jack, Kate, Sawyer, and Lock are out finding Aaron right now." Sun said it a worried tone.

Claire started screaming at the top of her lungs"How will it be ok?! What if they don't find Aaron!" She started crying even harder.

"Hey Jack are you sure this is the right way?" Kate asked a bit confused.

"Well we can't just walk right up to there camp. We have to go around it and find a way to get all of our people back." Jack said not sounding to sure.

"Do you know a way yet?" Kate asked

"I'm working on it."

Back at the cells Charlie was trying to get Micheals attention.

"Hey Micheal! Micheal! MICHEAL! It's me Charlie."

"Hey Charlie." Micheal said sounding depressed.

"Whats wrong man?"

"Whats wrong! Whats wrong! Looking around we've been captured by the others, I can't save my son, and I have to just sit here and wait for the worst to happen!"

"Well I can see you have a lot on your mind, but I'm sure someone will come to save us. How'd you get here anyway?"

"Well.."

"I think we're almost there Jack." Lock said sounding eager.

" Yah I think so too." Jack replied.

"Hey Freckles you worried?" Sawyer asked Kate.

".....Little bit."

"Hey, Jack I think we're....AAAHH!"
Lock tripped and caught his leg in what looked like a bear trap.

"Lock!" screamed Kate.
she tried opening the bear trap, but couldn't do it herself.

"Sawyer help me!"
Sawyer and Kate opened the trap together, and got Locks leg free.

"AAAHHH!"

"Let me take a look at it." Jack said running towards Lock. Jack started exaimening Locks leg. "Does this hurt?"

"AAHHH! Yes!"

"Ok we're going to need to give you some antibiotics, and wrap this up in a bandage."

At the island everyone was crowded around Claire trying to give her some sort of sympathy.

Back at the cells Micheal was just beginning his story of how he ended up here.

"Well.."
A door slammed Charlie and Micheal immediately stopped talking.

To Be Continued...
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Old 02-26-2006
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I hate the blue on black font...

Wow, just read it, sounds cool :)
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Old 02-26-2006
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Yeh I like it.It's cool you've got like 3 different views
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Yeah, different views are cool... that's pretty much what the whole Lost Novelation series is, other castaways going through the same story line, just from a different view.
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Old 02-28-2006
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Thanks for the comments and now I'll soon start Part 2 of this mysterious story!
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Old 03-08-2006
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Oh cool...hurry up with it!! lol
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Old 03-12-2006
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That was awesome, it was really great... can't wait for the continuation! LOL! I just didn't like the blue font... hurt the eyes.
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