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EDIT: topic title, topic description, added [PG-13] label, added lines (like the one bellow) - Red Matrix
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OK, hi. I'm new to this, like posting fanfics. My dad was driving me to my friends house when I thougth of this totaly messed up idea, see say the crash never happened (oh ya, srry Kates not a crimanl in this.) like, this is all when there like little kids, well like 18, see? Or 16, I'm not sure, but there'll be flash backs two, showing how they met.

Summary: Its Jack, Kate, Charlie, Claire, Shannon and Sayid at the being who all get moved to a enw school, kinda a boarding school and they met Sawyer, Sun, Jin(who are not maried yet)Locke and Micheal who has a little brother Walt, boons dead, But Mr.Artz is there teacher. Its basicly a romance, mostly Jate.

Disclamer: Don't own anything but the school.

Please reply! My spelling will get better, I promise!
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Chapter one: How Jack met Kate

Kate stood in line for juice, tapping her feet she wondered if the line would move any slower, Shannon and Claire were waiting for her. ?Hurry up!? The five-year-old girl snapped at the rest of the line and few people turned around and glared at her. She felt a tap from behind and slowly turned around.

?That was rude.? Said a boy, he was a tiny bit taller then her and had brown hair.

?Don?t tell me what?s rude!? Kate snapped back.

?Jack come here!? A dark boy with curly hair called from the side.

Kate snorted. ?Jack??

Jack looked back at her with a angry face. ?Well what?s your name?? He asked stubbornly.

?Kate.?

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?Kate! Come one wake up! Were supposed to meet the guys!? Shannon said banging Kate over the head with a pillow, in the distance she could hear Claire laughing.

It was eleven years gone by, Kate had never gotten her juice but instead went to sit down with her two best friends, Shannon and Claire, later that week they were in a group for gym with Jack, Sayid and Charlie. They were inseparable ever since.

?Jacks pulling off his top!? Shannon yelled suddenly. Kate sat up suddenly. ?See Claire she does like him.?

?She does not.? Kate said falling back down and pulling the covers over her head. ?She?s only friends with Jack and she?s name is Kate!? Kate told them.

?Come one, its one pm! Get up! Your moms made breakfast and were dressed, we got to the movies at two.? Claire told her.

?You only want to go because Charlie?s there!? Kate snapped her, she watched as the blonde went a light pink. ?I?ll be ready in five minutes.?

That was the difference between them and her, Kate was brunette who never brushed her hair and never put on makeup, lip-gloss on special occasions but not normally. Kate was a tomboy and those to were very girly, how they got along was a mystery.

Kate pulled an orange top out of the closet and slipped in on and pulled on dark blue jeans. Grabbed a blue purse and her wallet and walked to the kitchen table.

She sat down and looked at Shannon who had on a pink mini skirt and a white frilly tank top. Claire had on a long black skirt and a black shirt. They both had on makeup to match there out fits and had their hair up. Kate looked at there disapproving faces and she reached behind her and picked up an elastic band and tied back her hair. They both went back to eating. Kate smiled.

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?So Jack-o, you want to sit next to Ka in the movie theater?? Charlie asked.

?I don?t care. Kate is just my friend, and don?t call me Jack-o.? Jack told Charlie. But Jack did care; he had better sit next to Kate.

They were sitting in Charlie?s basement, playing pool and going over seating arrangements. Sayid next to Shannon and Charlie next to Claire, which left Jack and Kate.

?She doesn?t mind Ka, and no I won?t stop calling you Jack because it makes you blush and that?s funny.? Charlie said matter-o-factly.

Sayid shook his head and looked at the clock. ?Come on, its one twenty, the movies popular, we should go pick them up.?

He grabbed his car keys and the three-pushed there way up stairs.

?By mum were going!? Charlie called.

There was a slam and then some strings and a ok! Charlie nodded. ?Boy were lucky you have your license.?

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OK it sucked out loud, but please give me a chance:(
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No body? OK. I'll post the next chapter then.
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I liked it! Very creative.....
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Chapter two: Crash landing

Jack walked up to the house and rang the doorbell; he looked back to the car and saw Charlie and Sayid moving around in the minivan so that the seating arrangements would work out.

The door opened and Miss, Austin stepped out; the large lady was still in her nightgown.

?Jack!? She screamed in to the house. ?Kate! Jack?s here!? There was a lot of screaming from inside then Kate came running out the door, carrying her sneakers, she grabbed Jack?s hand, laughing nonstop the two raced to the car. Jack glanced back at the house, Shannon and Claire were tiptoeing towards them in there heels, and each had a piece of makeup in hand. Jack laughed as Kate pushed him in to the car; Kate climbed in and fell on to Jacks lap. There was an awkward silence while Claire climbed in the back next to Charlie and Shannon moved next to Sayid in the front.

?Sorry.? Kate whispered moving of his lap in to the seat next to him.

?Its ok.? Jack whispered back.

?Everyone in there own seat?? Sayid asked checking the rear view mirror, winking at Jack he pulled away.

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The awkwardness had died down after about a minute when they pulled up in to the movie theater Kate was laughing and punching Jack?s arm as she always did.

Kate pulled open the door. ?Jack, I bet I can beat you to the ticket line!? Kate challenged. Jack laughed following her. Kate was about to run across the street when a car whizzed by nearly hitting her. Kate screamed loudly and the car honked it horn, Jack came running and rapped his arms around her.

?Are you ok?? He asked, Kate nodded as Claire, Shannon and Charlie came up. They looked between Jack and Kate. Jack nodded, realizing his arms were still rapped around Kate. ?She?s ok.? He said pulling away. Sayid came jogging up.

?Kate I heard you scream?is very thing ok?? He asked grabbing Shannon?s hand. Kate nodded and gripped Jacks hand as they walked across the street.

After buying the popcorn, tickets and pop the moved in to the less then crowded Movie Theater. Charlie slid in, then Claire, Sayid and Shannon.

?Ladies first.? He said allowing Kate to move in before him.

Kate smirked. ?What are you waiting for Jack?? Kate asked. Ouch. Jack put a hand over his heart but moved in next to Shannon anyways. Jack and Kate were sitting down quietly while the other four chatted.

Kate felt something on her back and looked, Jacks arm was draped over her chair. Kate sat up a bit and looked at him.

?What?? He asked. Kate raised an eyebrow. ?What?? He said then saw his arm. ?Oh come on Kate.? Jack sighed. ?I?m just resting my arm?ok do you want me to move it??

?No its fine.?

Kate turned back to the screen.

What the heck? I?ll never under stand women! Blech, this pop is gross!

OMG! He sort of has his arm around me, should I put my head on his shoulder, no, he said he was resting his arm, but his hand his on my shoulder this is new, oh I DO like him, Kate you sound so stupid like a childhood crush. Stop and watch the movie. Movie? What movie are we watching?


Poor Kate, I know how she feels....anyways......
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Chapter 3: Moving on.
Jack
Kate
Jack held open the door, to Kate?s house. The movie was over and now Sayid had to drop of him and Shannon then go home. Kate stood there for a minute.

?I?ll see you later Jack.? She said meeting his eyes.

Go inside!

Kiss her!

?Yeah, so?what did you think of the movie?? Jack said shutting the door.

What the heck?

He closed the door! Kiss him!

?Oh, it?s was really good, I don?t think Charlie and Claire paid much attention to it thought.? She said winking.

What? Did I just wink at him? No! Oh what?s this? He?s smiling! What?

Wink? Smile! There?this is ok! KISS HER!

Jack leaned in and planted a kiss on the side of Kate?s cheek. Kate blushed.

?I?ll see you later Jack.? Kate said hugging him then going inside. Jack stood there in shook.

Yeah!

Note to self, get practice.

Jack climbed in to the car and saw Sayid and Shannon?s grinning faces.

?

Kate walked up stairs in to the kitchen.

?Oh hello darling. I?m glad your back. I have to tell you something.?

Oh no.

Kates blood pulse was moving ten miles a minute, what was it her mom wanted to tell her?

?Your going to a boarding school.?

?What?? Kate screamed and jumped out of her chair and ran to her bedroom. She flopped on to the soccer ball covered bed and weeped.

Kate thought about the memories she had in this small town, her friends, Jack, her school, Jack, her after school commitments, Jack. Jack? How was she going to tell her friend?s. She?d tell Sayid to tell them all on the day she left, Sayid was fantastic with that sort of stuff. Kate cried, were was this new school? Was it her mom?s choice or was is something her father had told her mom to do. They had been divorced for 6 years, she remembered the day she found out, she had ran all way to Jacks house, surprisingly Charlie and Claire were they?re two. She couldn?t leave them behind, and she wouldn't

Thats all for now!
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wow. i thought that it was going to be stupid, but i was desperate for another jate fanfiction so i read it. but wow. that was really good! update soon! :happyjump:

and sorry ppl, if i do sum'm rong. im a newbie here. :newbie:
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It's really good! Keep writing! :)
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!

I mean for goodness sakes...ive had dreams about it ive wanted and update so bad! lol!


UPDATE PLEASE!
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Yeah, please update really soon!
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UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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The more I hang around boys, the more I love my horse!

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