The Island

[SawyersGurl]

Rating:Pg-13
Plot: The island is about an 18 year old that was going to L.A. for a vacation with her pregnant sister Lilly and everything changes for her when they crash


Christmas was crying. People where flying out of the plane Lilly was holding on to her for dear life. She knew she was going to die she just know it.....

Christmas woke up in a jungle she was so confused she didnt know what was going on she didnt know where she was the last thing she remembered was getting on a plane. Now she was in some jungle and didnt remember how she got there, She stopped and listened closley she heard people screaming and crying. Christmas got up and began to run as fast as she could towards the people.

[SawyersGurl]

ok this isnt that good yet but I just wanted to see what yall thought about this part

[Do_Or_Die]

I liked it alot, just I think you used her name a little much ;)

[SawyersGurl]

Ok thanks Ill change it

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When she got to where the people were the first thing that popped into her mind was her sister Lilly oh god where's lilly she thought to herself. Christmas began running around the beach screaming Lilly she was so scared that something happened to her. Finally after what seemed like forever she seen her clutching her belly and crying. She ran up to her and said "Lilly its ok its me Chrisy." Lilly looked at her painfully and said "Chris its coming its coming Chris."

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"Lilly your only seven months along." Christmas said standing there horrified "Ok Calm down Lil its going to be okay stay here and Ill try to find someone." She said after a few seconds. "No please dont leave me Chrisy you cant leave me!" Lilly began yelling then she began to cry harder. "We have to get somebody to help you." Christmas said starting to panic.